tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post142193864129262559..comments2023-08-06T08:48:02.347+01:00Comments on Spring: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-20725811698411396092010-03-22T15:55:28.658+00:002010-03-22T15:55:28.658+00:00This is just beautiful.This is just beautiful.diana l.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12508598285292827626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-58498450654717165532010-03-19T21:38:54.130+00:002010-03-19T21:38:54.130+00:00I really like this!
sparrows fly in threes
from h...I really like this!<br /><br /><i>sparrows fly in threes<br />from hedge to sunlit tree<br />a belt of jasmine </i><br /><br />Did you consider this line order as well?<br /><br /><i>a belt of jasmine<br />from hedge to sunlit tree<br />sparrows fly in threes</i><br /><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-41286352131072009072010-03-19T09:13:10.311+00:002010-03-19T09:13:10.311+00:00lovely image, it feels almost summery in factlovely image, it feels almost summery in factCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.com