tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post2127474210858601624..comments2023-08-06T08:48:02.347+01:00Comments on Spring: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-40581314715460697982010-05-29T15:53:20.735+01:002010-05-29T15:53:20.735+01:00I really like the play on this haiku:
crow sails
...I really like the play on this haiku:<br /><br /><i>crow sails<br />on rhino’s back<br />a new journey </i><br /><br />It's as if the rhino has <i><b>"crow sails"</b></i><br /><br />Perhaps a definite article for the rhino? <br /><br />e.g.<br /><br /><i>crow sails<br />on the rhino’s back<br />a new journey </i><br /><br />all my very best,<br /><br />Alan<br /><a href="http://area17.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Alan’s Area 17 blog</a><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com