tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post4371592971333079108..comments2023-08-06T08:48:02.347+01:00Comments on Spring: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-4147555572512998402010-06-03T21:23:31.225+01:002010-06-03T21:23:31.225+01:00I agree!
dusk-
a firefly escorts me
to put out th...I agree!<br /><br /><i>dusk-<br />a firefly escorts me<br />to put out the trash </i><br /><br />I really like this, but wonder if it needs "put out"?<br /><br /><i>dusk-<br />a firefly escorts me<br />to the trash </i><br /><br />??<br /><br />all my best,<br /><br />AlanArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-51534872768734667182010-06-03T18:00:36.726+01:002010-06-03T18:00:36.726+01:00This is wonderful! (I think you missed your calli...This is wonderful! (I think you missed your calling as a Pixar writer!)diana l.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12508598285292827626noreply@blogger.com