tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post7529950339814920458..comments2023-08-06T08:48:02.347+01:00Comments on Spring: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-64578959866311197232010-05-06T14:42:01.286+01:002010-05-06T14:42:01.286+01:00Thanks veru much,Alan! I agree with You.Thanks veru much,Alan! I agree with You.Genhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02976948919955615496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-16884519718685465482010-05-06T14:18:23.981+01:002010-05-06T14:18:23.981+01:00I like the haiku but it might need tightening up i...I like the haiku but it might need tightening up in the English-language version e.g.<br /><br /><i>Southern wind<br />A sticky leaves of birches<br />Smelling spring<br /><br />southern wind<br />the sticky leaves of birches<br />smell of spring</i><br /><br />all my best,<br /><br />Alan<br />Literature Director, <a href="http://area17.blogspot.com/2010/03/2010-bath-japanese-festival-there-is.html" rel="nofollow">2010 Bath Japanese Festival</a><br />.<br /><a href="http://area17.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Alan’s Area 17 blog</a><br />.<br />Co-judge: <br /><a href="http://kidsearthdayhaiku.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Kids Count for Earthday 5-7-5 Haiku Contest 2010</a>Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com