tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post9097749611170054087..comments2023-08-06T08:48:02.347+01:00Comments on Spring: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-23080397217039492092011-06-28T07:18:32.628+01:002011-06-28T07:18:32.628+01:00..nice one..Line 5 has to be:
lingers like a catar.....nice one..Line 5 has to be:<br />lingers like a cataract<br />or:<br />lingers like cataracts<br /><br />..in order to be more precise<br />English..spirosAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-7033005863059912592011-06-11T18:21:31.498+01:002011-06-11T18:21:31.498+01:00David,
Sorry, it's my fault. It's really ...David,<br /><br />Sorry, it's my fault. It's really there.Wahyu W. Basjirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04260428377205211034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-1429011214301060952011-06-11T18:19:32.713+01:002011-06-11T18:19:32.713+01:00Thx, Diana
David,
Too bad, it says "Sorry, t...Thx, Diana<br /><br />David,<br />Too bad, it says "Sorry, the page you were looking for in the blog Conjured Sunlight does not exist."Wahyu W. Basjirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04260428377205211034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-4720812194967892352011-06-11T12:22:48.388+01:002011-06-11T12:22:48.388+01:00I like this.
What I wanted to write was this remi...I like this.<br /><br />What I wanted to write was this reminds me of the poem 'A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford by Derek Mahon.<br /><br />Here is a link to the poem<br /><br />http://conjuredsunlight.blogspot.com/2011/06/disused-shed-in-co-wexford-by-derek.htmlDavidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14343643387576533616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-53425529966454686532011-06-10T17:17:23.154+01:002011-06-10T17:17:23.154+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14343643387576533616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8224371597574786668.post-19613132144101476422011-06-10T05:14:30.319+01:002011-06-10T05:14:30.319+01:00I love the first two lines of this.I love the first two lines of this.diana l.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12508598285292827626noreply@blogger.com