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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

back from the beach -
a grain of sand crunches
between my teeth


retour de la plage -
un grain de sable crisse
entre mes dents


P K Padhy said...

Excellent poetic painting with imagery.

Alan Summers said...

Really like this Damien! ;-)


Dennis Tomlinson said...

Very good - you make one grain of sand so significant!

diana l. said...

What fun! (even though I hate when this happens to me)

Alan Summers said...

Congratulations on your other haiku doing so well in the Haiku Foundation haiku contest.

If you don't submit it to another contest (which you should) then submit it to haijinx! ;-)