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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

early ride
fog spilling
over the hilltop


Beatrice V said...

I love this Reihasha --I wonder what you think of stretching the middle line a bit, to get more of that slow visual effect of the fog rolling down gradually, by using something like 'unfolding' or even 'rolling down' . You have a very nice image here, lovely.

diana l. said...

Here, here. I can see it.