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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

Lonely sunrise--
birds flying away in search
for worms in ash


P K Padhy said...

A creative expression with vivid imagery.

diana l. said...

I like this a lot, but think that for it to be grammatically correct you'd need to either say:

"birds fly away in the search
for worms in ash"


"birds flying away in search
of worms in ash"

An evocative unique image.