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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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cherry blossoms -
the window wide open
to the morning sun

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fleurs de cerisier -
la baie vitrée large ouverte
au soleil de l'aube

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Really like this.

Just one suggestion:

cherry blossoms -
the window wide opened
to the morning sun

cherry blossoms -
the window wide open
to the morning sun


Fantastic haiku, simple and inviting.

Damien Gabriels said...

Hi Alan,
thank you for your comment and your suggestion : I correct my post !

Once again many thanks for your attention
All my best

Damien