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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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dreary morning
my knees announcing the rain
before it arrives

3 comments:

Beatrice V said...

very good one!

Karen said...

Yep, nice one.

Maybe consider "announce" but a good haiku!

Alan Summers said...

I agree! ;-)

It might be worth considering "announce" maybe?

But a nice haiku! ;-)