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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty


blue sky
on a light breeze
summer's perfume


P K Padhy said...

Interesting images. Poetic indeed!

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Liked this!

diana l. said...

Very pretty combination of sensory impressions. (I'm not sure you need "today", and I think you mean "summer's".)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Diana. You are right. today
is not needed and thus the KU is stronger. Thank you.


Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks PK for your kind comments. I am glad you liked it.


Cassiopeia Rises said...

Carlos, thank you for reading my work and for your comments.