I love this!
Thanks Vida, and well done on your Mainichi credit! ;-)Alan
Thank you, Alan! I have good teachers :)You and everybody else on this blog have been so kind and supportive ever since my very first poetry attempts!
..that's really great, Alan..i'malso in another group whose moderators wouldn't dream of usinga full seventeen syllables--but isay, what matters is the completepoem (the haiku/senryu)..and sometimes the short offerings of they who are so bent, could well beimproved by more..>>spiros
Gosh it does look like it's almost seventeen syllables. ;-)I think it's 5/7/4 but depends on how a person's accent works I guess. ;-)It's an old version now, this is the current one:starlight and memorythe sneeze of a one-eyed dogWhat forum is it?Alan
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