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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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open tulip
a chalice for the rain
fallen petals

2 comments:

David said...

good one Rachel!

here is my take on it

open tulip
a chalice of red
petals

or

open tulip
a chalice of petals
collecting rain

anyway your haiku is good!

David

Beatrice V said...

Lovely one Rachel, and I also love David's 'variations' on it, specially the last one