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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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dew boiled by sunrise
the warm scent of earth rises
into my nostrils

1 comment:

David said...

i like lines 2 and 3

but I think the dew needs a lighter touch then 'boiled'

dew erased by sunrise perhaps??