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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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sparrows fly in threes
from hedge to sunlit tree
a belt of jasmine

3 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely image, it feels almost summery in fact

Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

sparrows fly in threes
from hedge to sunlit tree
a belt of jasmine


Did you consider this line order as well?

a belt of jasmine
from hedge to sunlit tree
sparrows fly in threes


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diana l. said...

This is just beautiful.