Gen, I enjoy you haiku and it is a shame we only get to read a translation! I wonder whether your translations are literal or interpretative? It is always so hard with poetry... for example this haiku here, would flow smoother in English so:
flowers whispering after the long winter the sound of music
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Gen, I enjoy you haiku and it is a shame we only get to read a translation! I wonder whether your translations are literal or interpretative? It is always so hard with poetry... for example this haiku here, would flow smoother in English so:
flowers whispering
after the long winter
the sound of music
All the best. B.
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