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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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carrion beetles
inside the deer skull
- spring cleaning

7 comments:

Beatrice V said...

wonderful! Quite unexpected last line, and yet a simple direct observation, but with a subtle double meaning.

Vida said...

I like that!

Dennis Tomlinson said...

A striking image and metaphor!

diana l. said...

A novel perspective.

Reihaisha said...

very very cool...

John McDonald said...

great one jim
john

Jim Tantillo said...

thanks everybody!