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a spongy path
under a silent sky
going nowhere
gerald england
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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty
---Santōka
mountains and ocean
too much beauty
---Santōka
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4 comments:
Discovering a new ambience.
..i like it with one reservation.."spongy path"
too reminds me of 'sponge
bath'
..think i'd like it even more if it were a soggy path
or some such adjective..thanks:
a soggy path
under a silent sky
going nowhere
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..and please do not be offended by my taking liberties with your poem..it's just that i've
participated in several workshops and sometimes
have hard time shaking off
that mode..>>spiros
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no offence taken whatsover Spiro - spongy was the feeling I had walking that particular path - soggy would be TOO wet - if it had been soggy I wouldn't have attempted it - actually a section was very soggy and needed careful negotiation.
Feeling well captured and a great photo!
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