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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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afternoon delight
men seated at red light
follow a swaying skirt

1 comment:

Area 17 said...

Cheeky! ;-)

afternoon delight
men seated at red light
follow a swaying skirt


I wonder if it can be tweaked slightly?

afternoon delight
men seated at a red light
follow the swaying skirt


all my best,

alan