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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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along the shore
a different wave of reflection
moon-lit night

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calendar pages—
between the dates
time escapes

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crow sails
on the rhino’s back
a new journey

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

I really like the play on this haiku:

crow sails
on rhino’s back
a new journey


It's as if the rhino has "crow sails"

Perhaps a definite article for the rhino?

e.g.

crow sails
on the rhino’s back
a new journey


all my very best,

Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
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