along the shore
a different wave of reflection
moon-lit night
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calendar pages—
between the dates
time escapes
*** *** ***
crow sails
on the rhino’s back
a new journey
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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty
---Santōka
mountains and ocean
too much beauty
---Santōka
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1 comment:
I really like the play on this haiku:
crow sails
on rhino’s back
a new journey
It's as if the rhino has "crow sails"
Perhaps a definite article for the rhino?
e.g.
crow sails
on the rhino’s back
a new journey
all my very best,
Alan
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