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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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sitting cat
under the Big Dipper
under the streetlamp


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7 comments:

John McDonald said...

great stuff Alan
john

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Liked the images.

Alan Summers said...

Thank you! ;-)

I don't feel I've done justice to the moment yet, but thanks for the thumbs up for the draft version. ;-)

David said...

surely

cat, under street lamp, under Big Dipper - though I prefer The Plough

Carlos Gesmundo said...
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diana l. said...

or maybe...

under the Dipper
under the streetlamp
a sitting cat

Alan Summers said...

Thanks for all the comments. As you know, this is a haiku draft. It'll be one of those that may take a few months. ;-)