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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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first warm day
sleet on the skylight
spring thaw

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

I do like this, but maybe too much going on?

Terrific second line! ;-)

first warm day
sleet on the skylight
spring thaw


First warm day is a season phrase for Spring.

first warm day
sleet on the skylight
NEW LINE


maybe?
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