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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

morning chills
a colony of snails
on a flower tub

1 comment:

diana l. said...

I like the concept of the snails being chilled, but is there a way to show this instead of telling it? (not that I have any bright ideas along those lines..)