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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty


On the red garage
Leaf shadows dance and shiver
Until the sunshine fades.


diana l. said...

I like this. Perhaps it might be stronger without "dance and."

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this

Beatrice V said...

LOvely, my opinion is with Diana, more concise makes it stronger.