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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

this morning
bursts with sunlight and bird song
such responsibility


P K Padhy said...

A different and interesting image- 'such responsibility'.

diana l. said...

I like the feeling of this one, but am a bit puzzled by it. Is "such responsibility" meant to be tongue in cheek?

David said...

diana the haiku does not really work - i was so excited by it i just posted it straight away. when I came back to it i relised my mistake.

'such responsibility' is a reference to making the day useful and meaningful. It was such a beautiful morning I felt such beauty needed a response from me.