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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty

---Santōka
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scavaging ravens
like torn black rags -
scattered by the wind

3 comments:

diana l. said...

I think this might be stronger without the word "like". What do you think?

David said...

scavaging ravens -
torn black rags
scattered by the wind

its good thanks diana

Anonymous said...

..very nice--i see it more clearly
with a colon (not the dash)..>>spiros