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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty


Tanka..the lament

she journeyed afar
and he lamented--listen to
the willows talk
they're wishing for
rosebuds for his lips
..(C)1986/2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram
..Note: previously, poem
had a staza break after L3
and "listen to" started L3
..and, possibly,
"rosebuds" ended L4
..and it was entitled: The Lament


The Tame Lion said...

Absolutely inspiring!

diana l. said...

This is gorgeous. It feels like it needs some ethereal illustration to deepen the story that it suggests.

Spiros Zafiris said...

..i've been trying to reply for
the longest time..hope it finally
works...please accept my gratitude
for your kindness, The Tame Lion and, friend, Diana