I like the haiku but it might need tightening up in the English-language version e.g.Southern windA sticky leaves of birchesSmelling springsouthern windthe sticky leaves of birchessmell of springall my best,AlanLiterature Director, 2010 Bath Japanese Festival.Alan’s Area 17 blog.Co-judge: Kids Count for Earthday 5-7-5 Haiku Contest 2010
Thanks veru much,Alan! I agree with You.
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