Southern wind
A sticky leaves of birches
Smell of spring
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Tiring the heart--
mountains and ocean
too much beauty
---Santōka
mountains and ocean
too much beauty
---Santōka
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Spring Haiku
Author Archive
- Alan Summers
- Andrei Dorian Gheorghe
- ashi
- Barry H. Levine
- barry levine
- Beatrice V
- carlos gesmundo
- Chevrefeuille (a.k.a. Kristjaan Panneman)
- Cora Whitmore
- Crafty Green Poet
- Damien Gabriels
- David
- Dennis Tomlinson
- diana l.
- Diana Teneva
- Diane Mayr
- Gemma W. Wilson
- Gennady Nov (Gen)
- Gerald England
- Gwilym Williams
- Isabel
- Jack Galmitz
- jem
- Jim Tantillo
- john McDonald
- kelly m.
- Kelly Shepherd
- kenneth daniels
- lightfoot
- Magical Mystical Teacher
- Maya Lyubenova
- Melanie Bishop
- Möme
- Nancy Bea Miller
- P.K.Padhy
- Paul Smith
- Pearl Pirie
- R.K.SINGH
- Rachel Green
- Reihaisha
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- Shanna
- Shelley Krause
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- Valentin Grigore
- Vic Gendrano
- Vida
- Wahyu W. Basjir
2 comments:
I like the haiku but it might need tightening up in the English-language version e.g.
Southern wind
A sticky leaves of birches
Smelling spring
southern wind
the sticky leaves of birches
smell of spring
all my best,
Alan
Literature Director, 2010 Bath Japanese Festival
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Alan’s Area 17 blog
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Co-judge:
Kids Count for Earthday 5-7-5 Haiku Contest 2010
Thanks veru much,Alan! I agree with You.
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