I love the first two lines of this.
I like this.What I wanted to write was this reminds me of the poem 'A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford by Derek Mahon.Here is a link to the poemhttp://conjuredsunlight.blogspot.com/2011/06/disused-shed-in-co-wexford-by-derek.html
Thx, DianaDavid,Too bad, it says "Sorry, the page you were looking for in the blog Conjured Sunlight does not exist."
David,Sorry, it's my fault. It's really there.
..nice one..Line 5 has to be:lingers like a cataractor:lingers like cataracts..in order to be more preciseEnglish..spiros
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