I love the first two lines of this.
I like this.What I wanted to write was this reminds me of the poem 'A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford by Derek Mahon.Here is a link to the poemhttp://conjuredsunlight.blogspot.com/2011/06/disused-shed-in-co-wexford-by-derek.html
Thx, DianaDavid,Too bad, it says "Sorry, the page you were looking for in the blog Conjured Sunlight does not exist."
David,Sorry, it's my fault. It's really there.
..nice one..Line 5 has to be:lingers like a cataractor:lingers like cataracts..in order to be more preciseEnglish..spiros
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I love the first two lines of this.
I like this.
What I wanted to write was this reminds me of the poem 'A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford by Derek Mahon.
Here is a link to the poem
http://conjuredsunlight.blogspot.com/2011/06/disused-shed-in-co-wexford-by-derek.html
Thx, Diana
David,
Too bad, it says "Sorry, the page you were looking for in the blog Conjured Sunlight does not exist."
David,
Sorry, it's my fault. It's really there.
..nice one..Line 5 has to be:
lingers like a cataract
or:
lingers like cataracts
..in order to be more precise
English..spiros
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